DIRECTOR CONTEST - Scene Review #10
 
  Your Scene's Title: The Ethereal Plane

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6. Log Line:
A dying guy by a dumpster tells a passing man somthing about some nonsense, just befor he is shot at by two members of the men in black. A chase follows.
7. Brief Synopsis:
A guy is bleeding by a dumpster, and another guy tries to help, but is shot at and then runs away and hides in a deli.
8. Brief Comments: (optional)
What was going on here? Well lit, some good shots. Lots of running.
9. Similar Films: (optional)
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10. Rate this scene overall:
Poor Excellent
11. Did the tone compliment or detract from the quality of the scene?
Tone complimented
12. Rate the concept/idea of the scene:
Poor Excellent
13. Rate the plot/story of the scene:
Poor Excellent
14. Were you able to follow the scene?
No, I found the screenplay difficult to follow.
15. Did the scene build well to the conclusion?
No
16. Did you feel satisfied by the ending?
No
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