DIRECTOR CONTEST - Scene Review #11
 
  Your Scene's Title: The Ethereal Plane

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6. Log Line:
A man is given a name and a code word from a dying man, and now he's on the run.
7. Brief Synopsis:
A man is found bleeding in an alley by a passerby. The injured man tells the man a secret password and a contact name before 2 agents approach from the end of an alley. A fast paced chase ensues.
8. Brief Comments: (optional)
I really enjoyed this clip. The pace was excellent, good acting, and good editing, caught my attention from the start.
9. Similar Films: (optional)
----none----
10. Rate this scene overall:
Poor Excellent
11. Did the tone compliment or detract from the quality of the scene?
Tone complimented
12. Rate the concept/idea of the scene:
Poor Excellent
13. Rate the plot/story of the scene:
Poor Excellent
14. Were you able to follow the scene?
Yes, I was able to follow it.
15. Did the scene build well to the conclusion?
Yes
16. Did you feel satisfied by the ending?
Yes
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