DIRECTOR CONTEST - Scene Review #13
 
  Your Scene's Title: The Ethereal Plane

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6. Log Line:
A guy runs from two other guys
7. Brief Synopsis:
See above
8. Brief Comments: (optional)
Not bad but kinda pointless. Should have led to something.
9. Similar Films: (optional)
----none----
10. Rate this scene overall:
Poor Excellent
11. Did the tone compliment or detract from the quality of the scene?
Tone detracted
12. Rate the concept/idea of the scene:
Poor Excellent
13. Rate the plot/story of the scene:
Poor Excellent
14. Were you able to follow the scene?
I found the scene difficult to follow at points.
15. Did the scene build well to the conclusion?
No
16. Did you feel satisfied by the ending?
No
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