DIRECTOR CONTEST - Scene Review #14
 
  Your Scene's Title: The Ethereal Plane

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6. Log Line:
Unkown guy dying leaves cryptic message to passerby before said passerby is shot at by official looking men.
7. Brief Synopsis:
A man lays dying next to a dumpster. Another man comes over to help. The dying man asks him to find a woman, call a specific number, and mention a secret word. He begs the man to take this information and come back for him. The other man is very confused and continues to attempt to call the police when two officials run into the alley and shoot at him. This starts an exciting chase scene wherein the guy finally hides by ducking into a deli.
8. Brief Comments: (optional)
This scene was great. the mystery really pulls you in and the chase scene was extremely well edited.
9. Similar Films: (optional)
Matrix
TimeCop
10. Rate this scene overall:
Poor Excellent
11. Did the tone compliment or detract from the quality of the scene?
Tone complimented
12. Rate the concept/idea of the scene:
Poor Excellent
13. Rate the plot/story of the scene:
Poor Excellent
14. Were you able to follow the scene?
Yes, I was able to follow it.
15. Did the scene build well to the conclusion?
Yes
16. Did you feel satisfied by the ending?
Yes
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