DIRECTOR CONTEST - Scene Review #1
 
  Your Scene's Title: The Ethereal Plane

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6. Log Line:
Science-fiction about a guy who comes back in time to try and stop his own murder.
7. Brief Synopsis:
A man gets shot by government agents. He has access to time travel secrets so he comes back trying to stop it from happening. He finds a friend he knows from the future, who doesn't know him yet, and convinces him to help him out.
8. Brief Comments: (optional)
I got lost. There were a lot of questions unanswered. But maybe that's okay. It was shot really, really well.
9. Similar Films: (optional)
----none----
10. Rate this scene overall:
Poor Excellent
11. Did the tone compliment or detract from the quality of the scene?
Tone complimented
12. Rate the concept/idea of the scene:
Poor Excellent
13. Rate the plot/story of the scene:
Poor Excellent
14. Were you able to follow the scene?
Yes, I was able to follow it.
15. Did the scene build well to the conclusion?
Yes
16. Did you feel satisfied by the ending?
No
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