| 6. |
Log Line:
The story is about a guy that finds another guy shot in
an alley. He tries to help him out and get him care, and
finds himself in the middle of what he has no idea, and
getting him shot at and chased around the area. |
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Brief Synopsis:
The scene takes place in an alley behind a parking structure,
which is where the man finds another man lying in a pool
of his own blood. The man tries to help and winds up needing
some help of his own, when he is discovered by the men
that must have shot the other man. |
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| 8. |
Brief Comments:
(optional)
A very ambitious scene for three minutes, and this contest.
I felt that it was a little bit like a "B" film. |
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| 9. |
Similar Films:
(optional)
----none---- |
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| 10. |
Rate this scene overall:
| Poor |
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Excellent |
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| 11. |
Did the tone compliment
or detract from the quality of the scene?
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| 12. |
Rate the concept/idea of the scene:
| Poor |
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Excellent |
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| 13. |
Rate the plot/story of the scene:
| Poor |
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Excellent |
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| 14. |
Were you able to follow
the scene?
| Yes, I was able to follow it. |
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| 15. |
Did the scene build
well to the conclusion?
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| 16. |
Did you feel satisfied
by the ending?
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