DIRECTOR CONTEST - Scene Review #2
 
  Your Scene's Title: The Ethereal Plane

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6. Log Line:
The story is about a guy that finds another guy shot in an alley. He tries to help him out and get him care, and finds himself in the middle of what he has no idea, and getting him shot at and chased around the area.
7. Brief Synopsis:
The scene takes place in an alley behind a parking structure, which is where the man finds another man lying in a pool of his own blood. The man tries to help and winds up needing some help of his own, when he is discovered by the men that must have shot the other man.
8. Brief Comments: (optional)
A very ambitious scene for three minutes, and this contest. I felt that it was a little bit like a "B" film.
9. Similar Films: (optional)
----none----
10. Rate this scene overall:
Poor Excellent
11. Did the tone compliment or detract from the quality of the scene?
Tone complimented
12. Rate the concept/idea of the scene:
Poor Excellent
13. Rate the plot/story of the scene:
Poor Excellent
14. Were you able to follow the scene?
Yes, I was able to follow it.
15. Did the scene build well to the conclusion?
No
16. Did you feel satisfied by the ending?
No
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