DIRECTOR CONTEST - Scene Review #3
 
  Your Scene's Title: The Ethereal Plane

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6. Log Line:
The main character is shot and is persuading the supporting character to get a machine and come back and save him.
7. Brief Synopsis:
This is a scene with a definite sense of urgency. The lead character is dying of a gun shot wound and the supporting character is being chased by two people who are trying to kill him. Time is of the essence.
8. Brief Comments: (optional)
Beautifully done! Love the shots in the chase scene, acting was delivered nicely, I felt the time urgency, editing was great! Good Job!
9. Similar Films: (optional)
----none----
10. Rate this scene overall:
Poor Excellent
11. Did the tone compliment or detract from the quality of the scene?
Tone complimented
12. Rate the concept/idea of the scene:
Poor Excellent
13. Rate the plot/story of the scene:
Poor Excellent
14. Were you able to follow the scene?
Yes, I was able to follow it.
15. Did the scene build well to the conclusion?
Yes
16. Did you feel satisfied by the ending?
No
 
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