DIRECTOR CONTEST - Scene Review #4
 
  Your Scene's Title: The Ethereal Plane

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6. Log Line:
An injured man in an alley seeks help from a stranger regarding a time machine.
7. Brief Synopsis:
When a stranger meets an injured man in an alley, the stranger becomes involved in a mysterious plot to find a time machine. When two government agents show up, the chase is on.
8. Brief Comments: (optional)
A well-made scene, especially considering the low budget.
9. Similar Films: (optional)
----none----
10. Rate this scene overall:
Poor Excellent
11. Did the tone compliment or detract from the quality of the scene?
Tone complimented
12. Rate the concept/idea of the scene:
Poor Excellent
13. Rate the plot/story of the scene:
Poor Excellent
14. Were you able to follow the scene?
Yes, I was able to follow it.
15. Did the scene build well to the conclusion?
Yes
16. Did you feel satisfied by the ending?
Yes
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