DIRECTOR CONTEST - Scene Review #5
 
  Your Scene's Title: The Ethereal Plane

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6. Log Line:
A man is found wounded in an alley way by a stranger. Someone is after him. He gives the stranger the name of a woman to find, get a machine from and return to save him.
7. Brief Synopsis:
Harrison has been shot. He is found hiding in alleyway by a stranger. The man wants to help Harrison by calling an ambulance but Harrison says "No. You've got to find Kala, get a machine and come back for me or I'm a dead man." Harrison writes the info on the man's shirt and gives him a secret word. Two men show up in the alley and chase the stranger. He evades them by hiding in a small resturant.
8. Brief Comments: (optional)
Thought the scene was done well. The camera angels were intresting, the chase exciting. Liked Harrison writing on the man's shirt. Makes it hard to wash away the blood!
9. Similar Films: (optional)
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10. Rate this scene overall:
Poor Excellent
11. Did the tone compliment or detract from the quality of the scene?
Tone complimented
12. Rate the concept/idea of the scene:
Poor Excellent
13. Rate the plot/story of the scene:
Poor Excellent
14. Were you able to follow the scene?
Yes, I was able to follow it.
15. Did the scene build well to the conclusion?
Yes
16. Did you feel satisfied by the ending?
Yes
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