| 23. |
Rate the scene's overall
production value:
| Poor |
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Excellent |
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| 24. |
Did camera movement
and angles compliment and enhance the scene or detract
and distract?
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| 25. |
Rate the scene's sound overall:
| Poor |
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Excellent |
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| 26. |
Rate the scene's lighting overall:
| Poor |
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Excellent |
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| 27. |
Rate the scene's costume design
overall:
| Poor |
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Excellent |
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| 28. |
Rate the scene's hair/makeup design
overall:
| Poor |
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Excellent |
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| 29. |
Rate the set design/location selection
overall:
| Poor |
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Excellent |
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| 30. |
Describe this scene using no more
than 10 of these words:
Ordinary
Suspenseful
Formulaic
Unrealistic
Entertaining
Interesting
My Kind of Story
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| 31. |
Would you trust this
director to make a feature film?
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| 32. |
Any additional comments?
Not based on this clip alone, but there is potential here,
would watch another clip from this entrant. A hard-to-believe
wait (11+ rings) for the 9-1-1 operator to answer the
phone call. Perhaps that is a reality in some cities,
but perhaps it would have been best to delay the call
or have Harrison convince him not to make it somehow (maybe
he could grab phone unexpectedly). FX wise, the blood
was unconvincing on the Protag's shirt. GUNSHOT &
SFX (I wasn't sure whether glass breaking was cell phone
or a nearby window. It sounded more like a window, but
I got the impression the phone was shot out of his hand).
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